Only just spotted the next chapter CGirl, it reads fine to me, there is a hint of Gollem in some of the dialogue but that is no bad thing and fits in nicely.
I'm intrigued what the sparkly blue liquid is they drink
Only just spotted the next chapter CGirl, it reads fine to me, there is a hint of Gollem in some of the dialogue but that is no bad thing and fits in nicely.
I'm intrigued what the sparkly blue liquid is they drink
77 and counting, less of the "Old" call me "Mike"
Nice work!
Do a little of something that makes you happy every day!
Thanks for the feedback guys, I haven't had chance to write any more yet but you'll be the first to know when I do
Suzi (01-09-18)