Quote Originally Posted by Jaquaia View Post
I couldn't put it down. It's so poorly written but it was like when you see a car crash, I couldn't look away. It's actually nowhere near a truthful representation of that lifestyle.
I think that's why erotic novels are popular. Guys like to be in control and have the woman submit to their every desire. (not going to happen) But with my character She is the one who is in command in the fantasy world sh is creating, and she is finding it difficult to gt out of. I was told i needed to spice things up a bit as my book is a bit bland.